Клавесин
покрой меня своим крылОм
и, оградИв невИдимым закОном,
оберегИ меня и всё моё.
меж собою звёзды говорят,
тайно перемигиваясь светом...
дУши зазывАя в запредЕльность
от заката до утренней зари.
перекИнув утончЁнный лУчик,
нежностью звезда легОнько прикоснУлась,
и сердЕчко мИгом встрепенУлось
в ожидании невЕдомой любви.
зачарОванные дАлью нЕба
вдохновением препОлнены сонЭты
в нас звучАщие под звёздный клавесИн.
перевод под EDM:
The Starry Harpsichord
[Intro]
(Gentle arp, soft pulse bass, celesta shimmer, airy textures)
My fate, don’t be so cruel to me,
Wrap me beneath your wing so free.
Shield me with a law no eye can see,
Guard me and all that’s dear to me.
[Verse 1]
The stars are talking softly to each other,
Secretly winking with their light,
Calling the soul into the boundless wonder,
From sunset’s glow to morning’s first bright light.
They stretch a delicate ray across the dark,
A tender touch from far beyond the spark.
And in that instant, my heart starts to beat,
Awakening to love that’s yet to meet.
[Pre-Chorus]
(Rising synth, snare ghost notes, tension climbing)
Enchanted by the distance of the sky,
Our sonnets swell with inspiration high.
Inside us, they resound with quiet grace,
Beneath the starry harpsichord’s embrace.
[Chorus]
Under the starry harpsichord we play,
Let the universe compose our way.
Every note a whisper from the night,
Guiding us into the endless light.
Don’t be cruel, my fate, just hold me tight,
Keep me safe beneath your wings, out of sight.
This music of the stars will lead me through,
I’ll follow every chord, I’ll stay true.
[Verse 2]
That gentle touch from a distant burning fire,
So light it seems it might dissolve in air.
But still it wakes the pulse inside my chest,
A promise of the love I’ve yet to guess.
The heavens speak in codes we can’t decode,
Yet feel them in the silence, in the road.
From dusk till dawn, they keep their quiet vow,
To pull the soul beyond the here and now.
[Bridge]
(Break: kick drops, ambient textures, vocal reverb, glitch FX)
No law of earth can hold this feeling tight,
Only the stars know how to keep the light.
Their invisible shield surrounds me all the while,
Turning every fear into a gentle smile.
Let the harpsichord of stars keep playing on,
Through every storm, beneath the endless dawn.
(Drop: full beat returns, warm supersaw lead, sidechain pumping, layered percussion)
[Chorus]
Under the starry harpsichord we play,
Let the universe compose our way.
Every note a whisper from the night,
Guiding us into the endless light.
Don’t be cruel, my fate, just hold me tight,
Keep me safe beneath your wings, out of sight.
This music of the stars will lead me through,
I’ll follow every chord, I’ll stay true.
[Outro]
Stars whispering, lights winking in the deep,
The soul is called to cross the hidden steep.
A delicate ray, a touch so soft and clear,
My heart is waking — love is drawing near.
Under the starry harpsichord…
We’re carried by the music of the spheres.
(Fade with repeating vocal chop): “under the starry harpsichord…”
Свидетельство о публикации №112111409398
Стихи звучат нежно и напевно, вроде бы сами по себе, но у Вас стихи завершены под звёздный клавесин. Красиво.
Условия конкурса выполнены чётко, но рифмы строк надо доработать, нечётко выбран стихотворный размер (в основном ямб, но хорей присутствует тоже). И в строках разное количество стоп.
Поместила рецензию сюда. Проще убрать.
Нина Плаксина 19.11.2012 00:28 Заявить о нарушении