to my imaginary lover

Екатерина Поздеева
Reach your hand and bring me there
You can't look so unprepared
I like you're being innocent
Easy to love this kind of man.

Just don't hesitate, not kidding
One more touch, my heart's not bleeding
Anymore cannot describe it.
Where are you? I haven't found you.

One more kiss, heart's beating faster
Can't help squeeze, you're my disaster
Killing me without a sound.
Please don't say "I'll be around"


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Good. Quite nice topic. Nevertheless, it's not clear why the rhymes are not enough exact in the basic lines. The last ones sound cool. Thanks.

Максим Митрофанов 2   13.07.2012 22:05   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Thank you. If the endings are not exact, doesn't mean rhymes are not exact. The melody while you're reading, makes them sound quite rhythmical. I believe this and I think it works.

Екатерина Поздеева   13.07.2012 22:22   Заявить о нарушении
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