Feelings

So, I can feel
The falling of the hearts,
So, I can feel
The shining of the moon.

So, I remember
The birth of new light star.
So, I can fly
In soul, deep, like BaicAl...

I see the crystal light
That's coming from the moon
Through water. Perfect sight!
But wish is diying soon...

And now I can feel hearts
Which're falling from the moon.
Word "love" here sounds like barks...
I'm sitting... white-white room...


Рецензии
Its perfect, as for me...
Use read-writable american wordformes, so more, so much louder.
Must be cool. Mean make so drive, so alivery, etc.
Am I so misfit? :)))



Волобуев   29.02.2012 04:34     Заявить о нарушении
Oh, thank you for your words :)

And I think that you have a really interesting works too)

Алексия Летто   29.02.2012 22:50   Заявить о нарушении
Благодарю Вас. Я-более русский, нежели англо- сакс :)))))))

Волобуев   29.02.2012 22:59   Заявить о нарушении