Stop crying
Your angel won't die.
Don't lie.
Blood is pouring.
Your nerves are tensed
But why?
Don't die.
Don't let me cry.
Just lie
That your angel
Won't die.
23.06.08.
Stop crying...
© Copyright: Алёна Чернушенко, 2012
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The sad thing is
Your eyes won't lie
until my heart is beting
you are mine
Exhausted, trembling hopeless fool
Despire the crowd , all so cruel
Nobody cares noone will understand
When I just see your face and hold your hand
Олег Артынов 16.02.2012 04:28 • Заявить о нарушении
Your eyes won't lie
until my heart is beting
you are mine
Exhausted, trembling hopeless fool
Despire the crowd , all so cruel
Nobody cares noone will understand
When I just see your face and hold your hand
Олег Артынов 16.02.2012 04:28 • Заявить о нарушении
Your poem is very beautiful and touching! Thank you for it, I like it very much! :) Your poems are also good, and I think that this one is one of your best works. I was also impressed by your quatrains - they are very-very-very well done! :) "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind" and "Nice and Slow" are those which I liked most. Thank you for your interesting thoughts and ideas! Good luck in your tryings! :)
Алёна Чернушенко 16.02.2012 23:01 Заявить о нарушении
Алёна Чернушенко 16.02.2012 23:01 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.