I try to find any words...

Где найти мне слова.../Анетта РУЖ
песенный текст:



Где найти мне слова, чтоб созвучьями стали
Доброты и любви той, что в сердце храню?
И, понятные всем, те слова бы звучали,
Задевая души роковую струну!
 
Где найти мне аккорд, чтоб звучать мелодично -
Голубою волной разбиваясь о борт
Корабля, что плывет сквозь шторма безразличия,
В океане судьбы из далеких широт...
 
Где найти мне мелодий волшебных звучание -
Гармоничное с пением птиц на заре,
С нежным шелестом трав, с глубиною молчания
Понимающих душ, со страдающих мне...



Англ. перевод Миледи Ольга   http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/milediolga2

I try to find any words... http://www.stihi.ru/2011/11/30/1540

...     I try to find any words... would became like accords ...
      of kindness and of love... in my heart  have to kept...
   they'll be close to men... those words would be heard...
having touched... strings of fate in a soul!..

...      I try to find  those chords... have to heard like melodies...
      by blue wave... being broken about the board...
   of the ship... that is floating through...the indifference storm...
through the ocean of destiny... of far breadthes...


...      I try to find the melody... of sweet magical sound...
      in concord ... with the singing of birds at sunrise..
   with gentle rustle of grasss... with the depth of a silence...
all ones hearing souls... which could feel my regret...


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I try to find the words...

... I try to find the words... would became like accords ...
of kindness and of love... they'll be kept in my heart...
They'll be close to men... those words would be heard...
if I'll touch strings of fate... in a deepness of sounds...

... I try to find the hords... like the melody found...
by blue wave...in my head... they'll dropped down...
Ships are floating through...the indifference storm...
through the ocean swings... in the breadth of wind strong...

... If I'll find the melody... of sweet magical sounds...
in concord with sunrise...with the singing of birds...
with the rustle of grasss... with the depth of a silence...
which could feel my regret... all ones hearing souls..

Миледи Ольга Переводы   06.09.2016 16:13     Заявить о нарушении
Не знаю куда поставить...
Моя душа...песенный текст...
My Soul... (song text)

When was in search of own haven...my soul... was flying from the sky... about fair life for ever... dreamed - easily seems the taken cross of life.. and in a way... to earthly spaces... that for new life... to spill the light ... decided wisely... with divine raving... in whose womb... to arouse spark...

From divine spark... the life... will flare... inside the womb of earthly mom... and will be fated... to be born... my soul... in her... in pain has agonized... to find freedom... in a body... would like to breathe... and to perceive... my soul... should begin believe... in me... outside itself to realize...

Been hold her... by own body... in trice... like twins... became with her... and even... it will fail remind... the soul's way... through shadows world... in circulation to appear... of the earthly sins... and of passions bold... and will remain... to beg a pardon... if won't die out... a spark in her...

That divine spark... would be flaming... and not to give it to cool down ... not have allowed... to become proud... to damn... the all severe world ... will have remained... and let mercy... made kindness... mankind's love... without shame...to say: farwell my body...if have to...to take out her above...

Миледи Ольга Переводы   06.09.2016 16:22   Заявить о нарушении
память страницы... из жизни листает... there're life's pages... come in my mind... боль...то вскипает... то вдруг угасает... pain... having boiled...or faded in kind... как миражами...из прошлого лица... there're the faces...mirage of a past life... не подчиниться б...не подчиниться... wouldn't to obey... don't obey a lie...

и не поверив...в ее неизбежность... and do not believe in...inevitably dot... жизни вкусив...и полет... и безбрежность... test life and fly... and a boundless grot... и замыкая... грехов вереницу... and locked as a chain... the succession of sins.. над суетой...воспарит белой птицей... up of the vain...you'll fly as a bird's sing...

в взглядах зеркальных...неба кусочки... in glances of mirror... are splinters of sky... в муках рождаются...верные строчки... were born in the pangs...the right lines of rhyme...

в душу по венам...небо втекает... by veins in a soul... the heavens is running... и отражает...все отражает... being reflected... reflected in mind... в вечном потоке...и по спирали... in a perpetual flow..and like spiral the way... чтобы вписаться...в явь...и не ждали... real time's coming.... with words 'didn't wait'...

капают буквы...плавятся строчки... are dropping the letters... melting the lines... в рифмы и в песни...не ставятся точки... do not put the points...in songs and in rhymes... прячутся звуки...прячутся тайны... hiding the secrets... hiding the sounds... болью разлуки... где-то на грани... as a pain of a parting...somewhere at bounds... ткутся сплетаясь... просто... без фальши... weaving in wreath...it's simple...falseless... стройным аккордом...все глубже...все дальше... by a harmony chord...more deeply... more long...

в небо сочится...синью бескрайней... in heavens enticing...by boundless cyan... да горизонтов... звездною тканью... above horizon...like a flash starry veil... запеленает... хрупкую душу... will wrap in a haze...your wounded soul... и звездопадом... свыше обрушит... as asterisk-falling...will drop from the height... сон откровений... как ручейками... the dream of frankness... as the pouring streams...

в тело вольется... запечетляя... in flesh will be flow... has saved in a mind... взглядов печальных... неба кусочки... the asking sad glances... the splinters of sky... просто...без фальши... не ставятся точки... it's easy...falseless...no dots in a rhyme... и наслаждаясь... мгновением каждым... and having delight... of all instants from light... преодолеть...все преграды однажды... will overcome...all obstacles...at once... и победив...притяженье земное... and being the winner... up earthly free flight... в жизни прими... нечто иное... you'll get from the life... the another someone...

Миледи Ольга Переводы   06.09.2016 18:52   Заявить о нарушении
I try to find the words...

Это прямо непременно хочу прочитать на презентации в английской версии)
СПАСИБО, Олечка!!!!!
с уважением и любовью,

Анетта Руж   07.09.2016 02:52   Заявить о нарушении