My only wish -- to make you good.
If I've just known that you'll be mine,
But i enjoy that understood
That life with you for me is fine.
I've searched for special kind of beauty
But i was blind to see you close
And love to you is my new duty
With kissing lips that red as rose.
My heart is beating strong once more
And i can feel that love exist
I could control myself before
But now to you i can't resist.
It's a great joy to see your face
While you are coming very close
To touch your skin, in any case
Can give me "loving overdose"
You are my love that's not the first
But surely is best of all
My heart won't stop and even hurt
Until my name I hear you call.
Until you call
© Copyright: Давид Купцов, 2011
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Cute, sensative and overdosed with useless grammar constructions
But who cares till you express your feelings with rhymed lines
It's better to make mistakes and be considered a fool,but a fool in love
Best regards
Oleg
Олег Артынов 21.10.2011 01:24 • Заявить о нарушении
But who cares till you express your feelings with rhymed lines
It's better to make mistakes and be considered a fool,but a fool in love
Best regards
Oleg
Олег Артынов 21.10.2011 01:24 • Заявить о нарушении