Sometimes I’m dreaming of my future life.
It will be full of love, and joy, and laugh.
I see your smiling eyes; I feel your hand in mine.
There’s nothing else I ever want to have.
I hear the sounds of ocean, feel the breeze.
This dream is only ours. Do you see?
We need just us to make the perfect world.
We need just us to be completely free.
I thought that I could never love at all.
I thought there’s no one who can make me live for real.
But now my faith in love becomes so strong.
Your gentle kiss is all that I can feel.
My dreams of future are my dreams of us.
My thoughts, my words and poems are for you.
You are the one that I will always trust.
And if you ask, one day I'll say “I do”.
To Him...
© Copyright: Светлана Белевцова, 2011
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Oh, wow! So sweet and soooo romantic! A true delight! I really enjoyed it, thank you.
Can I suggest a little something? In the end:
"You are the one that I will always trust" (because "ever" is mostly for negation) and
"And if you ask, one day I'll say "I do". ( 'll = will because you're talking about the future)
Otherwise your poem is perfect!
Элиза Микаилова 03.09.2011 04:46 • Заявить о нарушении
Can I suggest a little something? In the end:
"You are the one that I will always trust" (because "ever" is mostly for negation) and
"And if you ask, one day I'll say "I do". ( 'll = will because you're talking about the future)
Otherwise your poem is perfect!
Элиза Микаилова 03.09.2011 04:46 • Заявить о нарушении