You are my pleasure
You are my treasure.
My jewel and my brain.
I loved, you think that's game.
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You denied me
I refused worldwide
You can see
I'm in other side
Now I decide be bold
I fall in void!
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You always know that I feeble
But it is false.
I was I am I shall sensible
And you remain between the walls!
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I fly far down in this darkside
I tied with you. Together fall in tight.
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You 4
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There is a double mistake in the third line of the third verse. The word "sensible" is spelled with "e" and it is an adjective and can't be used with attributive verb "shall".
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Роман Углев 08.05.2011 18:49 • Заявить о нарушении
My regards...
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