Пробы песни в ритмах американского рока.. дубль1

your love is the pain out of me
and though I appreciate those moments
that binds us,
now no longer see the point in all this
you makes me gag reflex,
My love for you is the gag reflex,
and I'm tired of repeating myself, that we love,
but you do not love you
and indeed I was the other ...

yes no I need your love,
zasun it you know where
Now I'm free
free from you ... my dear
you know where to go
you know where to go
you know where to go ...!

and though crying at night and think of you,
but the hatred has become stronger -
you yourself kill yourself in me
and even it will be many days
and even many years pass
I read these lines,
Do not let me get easier,
and all seem to delirium, but more importantly,
that I know now, one ...

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and when you are happy
but happy without me
I'm still confident that I will be dreaming of you
I feel confident that their children will you tell about us
because right now when everything is there - not me ...
because I'll always be in your heart,
that which you hated so loving.

But now ...

yes no I need your love, (2 раза припев)
zasun it you know where
Now I'm free
free from you ... my dear
you know where to go
you know where to go
you know where to go ...! 

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20.10.10 г. (с) daughter of Chaos

первый раз пробую писать текст песни...получилась полная чушь, но шло на одном дыхании...
__ в стиле Paramore - All I Wanted...)