Я хочу, чтобы не было ссор!.. - Триолет

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Я хочу, чтобы не было ссор,
Чтоб царили уют и внимание!..
Как бы ни был нелеп разговор,
Я хочу, чтобы не было ссор.
Даже если «несу всякий вздор»,
Относись к мелочам с пониманием.
Я хочу, чтобы не было ссор,
Чтоб царили уют и внимание!..


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** 10.10.10 **

ТРИОЛЕТ - классическая твёрдая поэтическая рефренная форма, состоящая из восьми строк на две рифмы; причём, первая строка неизменно повторяется как четвёртая и седьмая, а вторая - как восьмая.
Рифмический рисунок: ABaA abAB.

Впервые узнала о такой интересной стихотворной форме со странички Розы Красной (http://stihi.ru/avtor/seika&book=7#7), за что ей благодарна от всей души! )))


Рецензии
словами сорить
всякий вздор говорить
оскорбить и каяться после
зачем нам с тобою обиды копить
не нужно ссориться больше
всякий вздор говорить
словами сорить

Елена Королькова-Дьякова   09.11.2015 08:57     Заявить о нарушении
Без ссор и сора слов
Богатый ждёт улов -
Гармония и Счастье!..
И это в нашей власти!

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Ты с этих пор и впредь
Не дай Им умереть -
Гармонии и Счатью!..
Я помогу отчасти!

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Ещё совет простой:
Дать рыбке золотой,
Что мы Любовью кличем,
Блистать в своём величье! ;)

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Чудесно ты откликнулась, Леночка! Спасибки! :)
А меня чёта потянуло на рыбу!.. ;)

С улыбашками-обнимашками )))

Анюта Аксёнова   09.11.2015 10:48   Заявить о нарушении
На рыбку потянуло- к пополнению)
может стихов, а может в семействе прибавление)))

Елена Королькова-Дьякова   09.11.2015 13:25   Заявить о нарушении
А, может, к пополнению в боках
(Угроза для моей фигуры, талии)?
И точно, я поправилась слегка!..
Пожалуй, поспешу крутить педали я,
Займусь с утра зарядкой и пробежкой!..
Эй, Лень, ну, прекращай свои насмешки! ;)

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А у Лени и Лены общий корень! ;) К чему бы это? )))
Спасибо за новую порцию улыбок, дорогая! :)

Анюта Аксёнова   09.11.2015 14:46   Заявить о нарушении
Лена никогда не ленится, она "отличница,комсомолка и ...просто красавица")))))

Елена Королькова-Дьякова   09.11.2015 16:19   Заявить о нарушении
Кто бы спорил?! Я не буду! ))) Всё из вышеперечисленного тобой - о тебе! :)
А это о Ней - http://www.stihi.ru/2006/10/21-933
;)

Анюта Аксёнова   09.11.2015 17:11   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написано 13 рецензий, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.