Good Bye

I am knocking on the closed door
but I think it’s time to understand
that you don’t love me anymore
it’s the end.

I am talking to an empty space
saying all the finest words I know
but my time is up and in disgrace
I must go.

I am crying in the pouring rain
overwhelmed by loneliness and fear
but it’s much too late, I drop in vain
every tear.

I am begging for another chance
asking you to give us one more try
but I cannot break through your defense
it’s Good Bye.


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I have read the poem and must stress that there is much sincerity in it.
Things do happen in life and the situation is quite typical, I suppose.
You have described it in a peculiar and nice way. I would like to express my gratitude for your creative approach to writing. Carry on! Success attend you!

Светлана Барашко   16.08.2010 11:57     Заявить о нарушении