Hungry for you

Melting slowly and rolling down
Candle tears are finally frozen.
Your fragile body dressed in a gown
Of a million divine roses
Moves so softly in a dance,
The dance with wordless night
And you give me no more chance -
I'm almost beastly wild.
And your tender, slender hands
Moving gently in the air
Welcome me to virgin lands,
Those of the delicious affair.
I can't tear away my eyes
From your dance in the dark,
Because you're so sweet and nice,
In my eyes grows on a spark.
Come on, baby, come and touch me,
Give me your warm hand.
Flames of fire, strong desire -
These feelings I can't stand.


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"Your fragile body dressed in a gown
Of a million divine roses" - it is a lovely phrase...And a nice verse...Only that I would change word "SWEET" which was mentioned two times...

Оксана Соловьева   15.05.2010 20:55     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for remark, I'll figure it out)

Пилипенко Сергей   15.05.2010 21:02   Заявить о нарушении

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