Anymore

Don't be sad and don't cry,
I just want you to die.
I can't stay anymore,
Now I know the score.
 
You will live, I will die,
I will cry, you will fly,
You should go your way
At the end of the day.
 
You're the God, I'm a man,
You're in love, I'm in pain,
Nothing comes from the past,
And the sun reds the west.
 
I wish I had the wings
To cut out the rings.
Now I know the score,
I can't stay anymore.


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Гармонично, эстетично, цельно.))

Эмилия Арнольд   01.09.2010 22:06     Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо... а мне уже не нравится... две хорошие строчки, а так слишком обычно и просто..

Поларис-2   03.09.2010 23:31   Заявить о нарушении