Blessed be the day of our meeting!
Your smile then asked me:"What is eating
You. I'll relieve your stabbing pain."
Oh, can you do it once again?
Dry up my doubt as if a tear.
Start haunting me and make it clear.
Let me enjoy this makebelieve -
I'll feel relief, I will forgive
Myself for being a stranger's wife.
If you're a river, I will dive.
If you're a mountain, I'll climb,
And I'll be space if you are time.
You are the Earth, I'm atmosphere.
I'm always yours, I'm always near...
Blessed be the day of our meeting
© Copyright: Оксана Свит, 2010
Свидетельство о публикации №110042306280
Свидетельство о публикации №110042306280
Рецензии
Olga! I have read it with breathless interest. What strikes me most is the rhyme which is very nice. Generally, it sounds very pleasant. A marvellous poem. I appreciate it greatly. I wish you further creativity.
Let me express my sincere gratitude.
Светлана Барашко 18.08.2010 13:14 • Заявить о нарушении
Let me express my sincere gratitude.
Светлана Барашко 18.08.2010 13:14 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much for your reviews, written in good English. ) And for your kind wishes. Creativity is my guiding star. )
Best regards,
Оксана Свит 18.08.2010 22:43 Заявить о нарушении
Best regards,
Оксана Свит 18.08.2010 22:43 Заявить о нарушении