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Äåíü ðîæäåíèÿ æåíû 2010 ãîä


Äîì ïîñòðîåí ïîêîåì äàâíî íåðàçîìêíóòûõ ðóê.
Ðèòì âëþáëåííûõ ñåðäåö íàïîëíÿåòñÿ âàëüñîì ñîáûòèé
Ìû òàíöóåì íàä ìèðîì,… è ðàäóãà äåëàåò êðóã, -
Òàê çàáûòûé õóäîæíèê çàìåøèâàë êîáàëüò â ïàëèòðó,-
Òàê çàáûòûé ìîíàõ òâîðèò  ÷óäî ñåðïàìè ìîëèòâ, -
Òàê íå ïðîøåíûé àíãåë ñîðèò çîëîòûìè ñåðüãàìè;
Òàê Ãîñïîäü íàøó Âå÷íîñòü ñîæìåò â èçóìèòåëüíûé ìèã,
×òîá ïî÷óâñòâîâàòü íàì
Êàê ìû ëþáèì ñèëüíåå ñ ãîäàìè.

Ýõî íàøèõ ñåðäåö îòçûâàåòñÿ â íàøåé ãðóäè.
Íàøè ìûñëè î Áîãå ÷èñòû è íåïðèêîñíîâåííû.
Íàøè äåòè åùå íå ïîìå÷åíû çíàêîì ñóäüáû…
Çíà÷èò, ìîëîäû ìû è èçûñêàííî…
Äîñòîâåðíû.

21 Àïðåëÿ 2010


Ðåöåíçèè
Ôîðìàòèðóåì òåêñò ïîä ïåñíþ, â æåíñêîì è ìóæñêîì èñïîëíåíèè ìîëîäûõ ïåâöîâ, âëþáë¸ííûõ è íàïîëíåííûõ ÷óâñòâàìè äðóã ó äðóãó - ïðîïèñûâàåì õàðàêòåðû îáîèõ, ñîçäàâàÿ ãàðìîíè÷íîå ñîçâó÷èå èõ ãîëîñîâ, - îïðåäåëè ñîçâó÷èÿ ïî ðèòìó è ãäå èì íàäî ïåòü âìåñòå, à ãäå îòäåëüíîé, ïîñòðîé êðàñèâóþ ëåñòíèöó ïîñëåäîâàòåëüíîãî èñïîëíåíèÿ, êîä â Jason, íî ñêîìïîíóé â ãîðèçîíòàëüíîì, ñòðî÷íîì ôîðìàòå, à òî íå âëåçåò â ïðîìïò.

ÄÎì ïîñòðîåí ïîêÎåì äàâíÎ íåðàçÎìêíóòûõ ðóê.
Ðèòì âëþáëÅííûõ ñåðäÅö íàïîëíßåòñÿ âÀëüñîì ñîáÛòèé
Ìû òàíöÓåì íàä ìÈðîì,… è ðÀäóãà äÅëàåò êðóã, -
Òàê çàáÛòûé õóäÎæíèê çàìÅøèâàë êÎáàëüò â ïàëÈòðó,-
Òàê çàáÛòûé ìîíÀõ òâÎðèò ÷Óäî ñåðïÀìè ìîëÈòâ, -
Òàê íåïðÎøåíûé Àíãåë ñÎðèò çîëîòÛìè ñåðÜãàìè;
Òàê ÃîñïÎäü íÀøó ÂÅ÷íîñòü ñîæìÅò â èçóìÈòåëüíûé ìÈã,
×òÎá ïî÷Óâñòâîâàòü íÀì
Êàê ìû ëþáÈì ñèëüíÅå ñ ãîäÀìè.

Bridge - Female, warm, intimate:
Îí, îíÀ, îíÎ, îíÈ,
ÑâÀ ÂñåëÅííîé,
ÑâÀ ËþáâÈè!
ÑâÀ ÂÈøíó ÌàõàÂÈøíó ÕÀðè!
ÑâÀ ÌÀ ÀÀ íÀíäà ìàéÈè
ààààààààààà àààààà àààà

Ýõî íÀøèõ ñåðäÅö îòçûâÀåòñÿ â íÀøåé ãðóäÈ.
ÍÀøè ìÛñëè î ÁÎãå ÷Èñòû è íåïðèêîñíîâÅííû.
ÍÀøè äÅòè åùÅ íå ïîìÅ÷åíû çíÀêîì ñóäüáÛ…
ÇíÀ÷èò, ìÎëîäû ìû è èçÛñêàííî…
ÄîñòîâÅðíû.

Bridge - Female, warm, intimate:
Îí, îíÀ, îíÎ, îíÈ,
ÑâÀ ÂñåëÅííîé,
ÑâÀ ËþáâÈè!
ÑâÀ ÂÈøíó ÌàõàÂÈøíó ÕÀðè!
ÑâÀ ÌÀ ÀÀ íÀíäà ìàéÈè
ààààààààààà àààààà àààà

ÄÎì ïîñòðîåí ïîêÎåì äàâíÎ íåðàçÎìêíóòûõ ðóê.
Ðèòì âëþáëÅííûõ ñåðäÅö íàïîëíßåòñÿ âÀëüñîì ñîáÛòèé
Ìû òàíöÓåì íàä ìÈðîì,… è ðÀäóãà äÅëàåò êðóã, -
ÎáíèìÀÿ íÀñ ìÈðîì ëþáâÈ -
ÁåñêîíÅ÷íî ãðÿäÓùèõ îòêðÛòèé

Ýõî íÀøèõ ñåðäÅö îòçûâÀåòñÿ â íÀøåé ãðóäÈ.
ÍÀøè ìÛñëè î ÁÎãå ÷Èñòû è íåïðèêîñíîâÅííû.
ÍÀøè äÅòè åùÅ íå ïîìÅ÷åíû çíÀêîì ñóäüáÛ…
ÇíÀ÷èò, ìÎëîäû ìû è èçÛñêàííî…
ÄîñòîâÅðíû.

Bridge - Female, warm, intimate:
Îí, îíÀ, îíÎ, îíÈ,
ÑâÀ ÂñåëÅííîé,
ÑâÀ ËþáâÈè!
ÑâÀ ÂÈøíó ÌàõàÂÈøíó ÕÀðè!
ÑâÀ ÌÀ ÀÀ íÀíäà ìàéÈè
ààààààààààà àààààà àààà

Ðèòì âëþáëÅííûõ ñåðäÅö íàïîëíßåòñÿ âÀëüñîì ñîáÛòèé
Ìû òàíöÓåì íàä ìÈðîì,… è ðÀäóãà äÅëàåò êðóã, -
ÎáíèìÀÿ íÀñ ñâÅòîì åùÅ íå ðîäÈâøåéñÿ ìÛñëè.

Ãäå çàáÛòûé ìîíÀõ òâÎðèò ÷Óäî ñåðïÀìè ìîëÈòâ, -
Ãäå íåïðÎøåíûé Àíãåë ñÎðèò çîëîòÛìè ñåðÜãàìè;
Ãäå ÃîñïÎäü íÀøó ÂÅ÷íîñòü ñîæìÅò â èçóìÈòåëüíûé ìÈã,
×òÎá ïî÷Óâñòâîâàòü íÀì
Êàê ìû ëþáÈì ñèëüíÅå ñ ãîäÀìè.

Ãäå çàáÛòûé ìîíÀõ òâÎðèò ÷Óäî ñåðïÀìè ìîëÈòâ, -
Ãäå íåïðÎøåíûé Àíãåë ñÎðèò çîëîòÛìè ñåðÜãàìè;
Ãäå ÃîñïÎäü íÀøó ÂÅ÷íîñòü ñîæìÅò â èçóìÈòåëüíûé ìÈã,
×òÎá ïî÷Óâñòâîâàòü íÀì
Êàê ìû ëþáÈì ñèëüíÅå ñ ãîäÀìè.
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Harmony builds."}, {"section": "Bridge 1", "instruments": ["Female Vocal", "Cello/Drone", "Bell sounds"], "description": "Near a capella. Meditative, mantra-like. Drone and bells provide a subtle base."}, {"section": "Verse 2, Bridge 2, Verse 3", "description": "Spiral development. Vocal harmonies become more confident (thirds, unisons). Instrumentation grows slightly in density, reaching an emotional peak in Verse 3."}, {"section": "Bridge 3", "description": "Most intimate and warm. Female voice over gentle guitar arpeggios."}, {"section": "Final Climax", "instruments": ["Full ensemble (transparent)"], "description": "Passionate duet, then a transition to lyricism. The final line ('...unborn thought.') fades to pianissimo."}, {"section": "Coda", "instruments": ["Vocals", "Guitar or Cello"], "description": "Return to simplicity. Whispered delivery. Last phrase dissolves into natural harmonics and silence."}], "vocal_production": {"priority": "Vocals 30% louder than instrumental mix. Achieved via:", "method": "1. HPF on vocals (M: ~80-100Hz, F: ~100-150Hz) to remove rumble. 2. Subtractive EQ in 150-400Hz range to reduce resonance. 3. Wide, gentle dip in instrumental mix at 200-500Hz to create space. 4. Light sidechain compression on instruments (especially low-end) triggered by vocals."}, "negative_prompt_strict": "ABSOLUTELY NO artificial timing: NO metronome, click track, regular ticking, mechanical pulses, quantization, grid alignment, electronic beats, sequenced patterns, drum machines, fixed tempos, rhythmic loops. Rhythm must be 100% organic, human-made."}, "text_policy": {"compliance": "YES. Original lyrics are preserved exactly, with no translation, additions, deletions, or reshaping. Accent marks (uppercase vowels) are for performance guidance only."}}

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