It was a day, I say, like many other days
When incidentally I met her face to face.
She’s charming as no one before
But she was only twenty four
Forgive me Daisy, I was not in trainee’s phase.
There was a year like many other years passed by,
I shouldn’t have made many reckless things, should I ?
She’s not so young but she was wise
I went all out to surprise
It was excitement but I still don’t know why.
It looks like centuries have gone away, my friend,
Since I had written gentle poem that I sent
To little Daisy, she’s my passion
The reason of my inspiration,
As if again I sing “I wanna hold your hand”.
A Day In The Life
© Copyright: Владимир Мак, 2010
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A very attractive poem, Vladimir! Old-fashioned, in the best sense of the word, I'd say. As if the past gives a hand to the present...
By the way, I also used to sing that song by The Beatles when I was young.
Sincerely,
Valery
Валерий Шувалов 24.03.2010 23:32 • Заявить о нарушении
By the way, I also used to sing that song by The Beatles when I was young.
Sincerely,
Valery
Валерий Шувалов 24.03.2010 23:32 • Заявить о нарушении
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