revise Feb 12, 2010
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River sleeps
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Stream hibernates silently - with
an air of importance, two crows
step along thin ice edge.
they don't pen haiku
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River peacefully sleeps–
two crows step along icy edge -
they never pen haiku!
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initial version, Feb 11, 2010
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River sleeps
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Stream hibernates - with
an air of importance, crows
step along ice edge.
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no haiku anymore!
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River sleeps– proudly
crows step along icy edge -
they don't pen haiku!
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Pavel Nichkov
River sleeps, it doesn t pen haiku - tercets
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