Forgive this world, because it’s old,
For its old memory of past.
Forget all days, that were so cold.
Remember years, which go fast.
Spring goes to summer. And today
Dark night of August lies on earth.
My thoughts have died and gone away.
In light of moon there’s magic birth.
The Love is born when nature’s calm
Under the star, which cross the sky.
The Love is born in ocean warm,
When there white seagulls cry.
If you stand here, on the ground,
Under the August sky at night.
And doors of Love you haven't found,
Oh, you should leave and close your mind.
Because, who feared magic darkness,
The slaves of stars they all became.
They’ve turned to cold winter goddess
And they will never be the same.
The August Night
© Copyright: Верея Назимова, 2009
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!!! But Love is not for every person !!! – precisely!!!
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Nice! Very refreshing, actually! Sounds eternal! Job well done!
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“The truth will be to close your mind” – 1. The truth will be close to your mind. 2. an extra syllable;
”When there white seagulls cry” – the same issue - an extra syllable.
Михаил Хитрик 05.08.2010 15:56 • Заявить о нарушении
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Nice! Very refreshing, actually! Sounds eternal! Job well done!
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“The truth will be to close your mind” – 1. The truth will be close to your mind. 2. an extra syllable;
”When there white seagulls cry” – the same issue - an extra syllable.
Михаил Хитрик 05.08.2010 15:56 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for these words, I'll try to correct my mistakes.
Верея Назимова 24.09.2010 21:43 Заявить о нарушении
Верея Назимова 24.09.2010 21:43 Заявить о нарушении
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