My own
Or for tenderly nursing a child that's sufficiently grown.
Words grow bolder, they blunder, or mockingly tear asunder,
And the lines that I want to surpass are forever my own.
When a day is repeating, I shrug, wish it luck with the Reaper.
I am jaded, and tired, and slowly becoming a stone.
You have nothing to offer, except for an intricate coffin,
And mistakes that I'll never surpass are remaining my own.
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I relly like it.
Although I'm not sure about 'blunder'...
Беляева Дина 21.08.2009 06:41 Заявить о нарушении
Кристина Девулите 21.08.2009 06:54 Заявить о нарушении
or am I missing something?
My brain's been fried...
That's why I was saving reviews of your translations for later...:)
Беляева Дина 21.08.2009 07:14 Заявить о нарушении