When I don’t see your pretty eyes
My heart is turning into ice.
When I don’t listen to your voice
My heart is hearing only noise.
You say, that I can’t give advice,
Because I’m silly and not wise.
That we can’t talk, we can dispute,
Because I’m dull, because I’m rude.
You say, that donkey is my name.
I disagree and I feel shame!!!
Perhaps my thoughts are not correct
And I don’t know, what means “exact”.
But you love me and you are right.
And our life today is bright.
Duk Alexander. 15th October, 2006.
P.s.
Маленькое баловство на курсах по английскому языку...
When I don t see your pretty eyes...
© Copyright: Дук Александр, 2009
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So pretty poem! I like it! It's very & very. :)
Best regards,
Гала Авис 30.01.2009 18:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Best regards,
Гала Авис 30.01.2009 18:37 • Заявить о нарушении
a very lovely piece of poetry. Being simple in rhyme and light in rythm it produces a favourable impression. Really!
P.S. The only inacuracy to be accounted is the unEnglish use of 'hear' in 'is hearing only noise'. It sounds misleading. )))
Энди Уиздрон 30.01.2009 23:41 Заявить о нарушении
P.S. The only inacuracy to be accounted is the unEnglish use of 'hear' in 'is hearing only noise'. It sounds misleading. )))
Энди Уиздрон 30.01.2009 23:41 Заявить о нарушении