Empty messenger
All night long.
I cannot wait -
I am not that strong.
Total darkness
Is in my heart,
Because we are
For so long apart.
Counting minutes –
Day goes by day,
Your absence takes
My mind away.
I cannot breathe,
I cannot think,
I cannot do
At least anything.
My soul is empty
Without your touch.
Return to me sooner.
I love you so much.
Missing you
© Copyright: Зоя Смольник, 2009
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What's up with the 14th and 16th lines? Is it the idea chosen? The rhyme is bad. The rest ones are good. Thank you
Максим Митрофанов 2 10.02.2010 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Максим Митрофанов 2 10.02.2010 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении