Let Me Stay

I will love you forever Baby
Though I’ve said it a hundred times
I will find those words may be
I will find those perfect rhymes.

I will manage to let you know
What you mean to my lonely heart
How sad I get when you go,
When we spend our time apart.

How high you can make me soar
How tall you can make me stand
How I feel like I reached the shore,
Every time that I hold your hand.

Every time when I smell your hair
Every time that I touch your skin
It’s my life that I want to share
It’s my life I want to begin.

All I want is to make you smile
Make you happy in every way
Put my feelings and words on trial
Let me love you and let me stay.


Рецензии
I will let you stay, but if only...
I will let you drink me, in case...
This October rain's trully pouring.
I won't take another disgrace.
I was waiting long. Did you hear?
I was scratching soul. Did you feel?
You are switching to faster gear.
Watch out for us. The speed may kill.

I ADORE this poem. And I Pray that someone could dedicate something of the kind to me.

Алла Белоусова   23.09.2008 22:41     Заявить о нарушении
Nice. I like the ending. It sure does, every time. Praying actually is not a bad idea, but all you have to do is keep your eyes and heart open. I personally beleive in fate. Sometimes it takes a long time to find your soulmate, but when you do, it's worth the wait. I am talking from personal experience, so trust me Alla, you will get your dedication, just don't give up on love.

Sincerely...

Анатолий Макаров   24.09.2008 01:03   Заявить о нарушении