Forever my love

I'll always fall in love again,
I will be nice for you, my sun,
I hope, you love my lovely rain,
I hope, you want to say: I love!


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You should work with you grammar In order to be understood, or even more In order to be understood correctly. When writing a poem, think of a grammar fists. A rhyme is not so important In english poetry. Rythm and tempo come first, and grammar -for foreigners.

Анна Кирикова   30.08.2008 09:30     Заявить о нарушении
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