Never argue..Only follow
Follow the turn
U can rhyme in words of sorrow
Heat of June and points
Dreams can hardly live to-morrow
Seized by iron-clad
Strangers failed to seed the horror
Of the getting mad.
.............................
It rang a bell.We really felt
So cold when kissed the ice
It'll seem to be so strange and soon
All that we hear is pulse
This metal was in everything
Contrasting our hearts
Agreed in dia-thermancy
To melt.We live just once.
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Could it be? It was so easy
To escape from time..
Minor keys pretended teasing
Twilight of the night..
Coming day will tire together
in a summer scent
Pints of strangely thawing weather
Forcing us to melt.
Dia-thermancy. E. v
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Well,
your poetry is quite touching.
You are walking the road which nobody walked.
Hope to see your precious world ahead again.
С поклоном и уважением,
Александр Деев 05.06.2008 03:18 • Заявить о нарушении
your poetry is quite touching.
You are walking the road which nobody walked.
Hope to see your precious world ahead again.
С поклоном и уважением,
Александр Деев 05.06.2008 03:18 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you...I was just printin' the 3 variant of recense for you..connection failed ..metal melt..)
I'll cope - hope so...from the 4 time))))))))))
My Respect and Regards..
Tanya
Рыжова Татьяна 05.06.2008 03:30 Заявить о нарушении
I'll cope - hope so...from the 4 time))))))))))
My Respect and Regards..
Tanya
Рыжова Татьяна 05.06.2008 03:30 Заявить о нарушении
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