Stranger than fiction

It is not pretty wrong. It is not pretty right.
It is life. As it is. Just a way of moving.
You’ve got wonderful sight,
       But there’s weakness of light:
You see faces around,
       But you look absolutely through them...


You've got dozens of questions
       And couple of answers inside
You may live as you like,
       But taboos are aggressively smilin’
So you open you soul,
       You've got nothing to hide...
But there's no one around -
       Plastic deserts on urban islands...


You believe, you insist
       That's there's something to change
You got tired preparing
       For perfectly-better tomorrow
All your actions have stopped,
       You're becoming insane
You are waiting for sign,
       You are seeking for love to follow.

....
It is stranger than fiction,
       It's more complicated than math.
Oddly noisy around,
       But your heart is completely silent.
You're not eager to choose
       Any future or any ambiguous past
You are sitting on shore
       And you see how your soul is flying...


(Winter.2oo7)


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I am greatly impressed... It is very thoughtful (if I can say like this)

Your Angel

Ангел На Земле   03.04.2008 00:14     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks, Angel!

Negations make thoughts/poems appear more thoughtful sometimes..
Maybe that's why it's so hard to make a "positive & thoughtful" 2-in-1 mix. What do you think 'bout that?

Smooth   03.04.2008 02:16   Заявить о нарушении
Most of all:

You're not eager to choose
Any future or any ambiguous past
You are sitting on shore
And you see how your soul is flying...

Люблю читать твои стихи на английском.
Так необычно и так задумчиво. Впрочем, как и многое у тебя.

Мактуб   09.04.2008 20:28   Заявить о нарушении
(да, и не обращай внимание, что я рецензию не совсем туда кидаю =) кнопочкой промахиваюсь. считай - это комплимент. промахиваюсь от эмоций)

Мактуб   09.04.2008 20:30   Заявить о нарушении
*не обращая*
Спасибо =)

Smooth   13.04.2008 17:17   Заявить о нарушении