Thy freedom is merely a figment
While many a playground will burn
So we can deny our confinement
In crevices – void and bygone
.............(ЧГ)
Set fire to every playground
Before they've rejected the game
Before you've appeared earth-bound
Keep flying
Stake out your claim
For someone inside to remain
.............(Ирина Каменская)
Thy Freedom - one apprehension, two attitudes
© Copyright: Черный Георг, 2008
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By the way - have you seen my reply to Irina's verses? It's called "Two tickets for a ride" and appeared as a kind of my attitude towards your idea of playground.
But of course I should think over the idea of freedom as well...
Ирина Бебнева 20.07.2008 17:19 • Заявить о нарушении
But of course I should think over the idea of freedom as well...
Ирина Бебнева 20.07.2008 17:19 • Заявить о нарушении
I haven't realized that you're an interpreter, Irina! Or else I cannot guess where from you know the tongue so well. And - yes, I liked your little poem too. Please don't be cross that I visit your pages so rarely, - lately I don't have much time even to say hello to my close friends... And TM keeps consuming a lot of my time, in fact so much that the idea of stepping down from the editor's position looks very attractive indeed...
Anyway, delighted to see you again.
Черный Георг 22.07.2008 05:11 Заявить о нарушении
Anyway, delighted to see you again.
Черный Георг 22.07.2008 05:11 Заявить о нарушении
Oh, George, how can I be cross with you! I don't want to be considered a person so boneheaded not to take into account your being busy! And couldn't I have but a little hope to gain just a little sparcle of your attention not being your close friend...
As for TM... I would prefer not to forfeit such an interesting person as an editor, you know.
And I have written one more letter, sorry. And I'd be really grateful if you find some time to read it...
Ирина Бебнева 22.07.2008 07:36 Заявить о нарушении
As for TM... I would prefer not to forfeit such an interesting person as an editor, you know.
And I have written one more letter, sorry. And I'd be really grateful if you find some time to read it...
Ирина Бебнева 22.07.2008 07:36 Заявить о нарушении
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