Something Is Wrong

       And now I revisit that pretty small house,
       Where I haven't been more than two years ago.
       But it's just the same: either music or flowers.
       And that girl the same one but something is wrong.

       And just as the long time the hostman is hearty.
       He renders a service for numerous thrown.
       But it seems to me he's indifferent to party.
       All things are the same ones but something is wrong.

       So I still remember the girl from my past heat.
       She smiled by her eyes when she sang that one song.
       Oh, how many times we commited the bad deed.
       It looks like the same one but something is wrong.

       And I see the same clock which counts the minutes,
       And I mix my friends and addresses. So long!..
       I wish to break out all the barriers and limits
       But I know that something will always be wrong.


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Hello, Yuri! Another pleasant surprise from you, another verse which I liked immediately. The last lines everywhere are simply magnetic. The idea which lies behind your verse is both understandable and recognizable. We are all searching for something which evaporates the moment we have touched it. But such is our Life...

I wish you every success,
Valery

Валерий Шувалов   11.03.2008 22:53     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much, Valery! This is the great prize for me.
The best regards,
Yuriy

Юрий Розвадовский   12.03.2008 02:27   Заявить о нарушении