It Seems To Me I Dream

       (It seems to me I dream, I dream...)
       I see the bird with damaged wings,
       The wounded horse into the stream,
       The furious lion on the ring.
       I see the sad and troublesome thing -
       The girl drops off her wedding ring.
       It's just a final for bad tales.
       But I would like to see some else.
       (It's seems to me I do not dream...)
       The voices, faces of the males,
       The smell of hospitals, the cream
       And heaven, heaven in the stream...
       
       


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The construction of the rhyme is just splendid!And the poem itself is marvellous!Will be glad to see You on my page too!With respect,Diana!

Диана Давоян   01.03.2008 16:58     Заявить о нарушении
Thank You very much, Diana! This is a great prize for me.
Sincerely Yours,

Юрий Розвадовский   02.03.2008 03:49   Заявить о нарушении