We have found our Love

Your pain and your happiness, all that you carry within
Your deepest emotions and hopes I will guard like my own
Your worries, concern for the future, the fear of sin
We’ll face them together; you won’t be standing alone.

Your sadness and tears; let’s take them and put them away
I’ll be like a rock, like a shield for your beautiful soul
Allow my Love to protect you and show you the Way
Allow my Life to be lived for that challenging goal.

I want you to open your heart like your favorite book
I’ll read every page; I will not miss a one single letter
I want you to share with me all the pictures you took
I’ll make them my own, and make every one of them matter.

Allow me to enter your life like the Holiest Church
I’ll fall on my knees and will pray to the heavens above
That neither of us will be ever resuming our search
We found each other which means we have found our Love!


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A very good poem, deeply felt from inside. One can only hope that
the one and only to whom it is addressed will hear the message...

Valery

P. S. I think it would be better to say: "let me enter your life"
or "allow me to enter your life".

Валерий Шувалов   18.11.2007 12:00     Заявить о нарушении
It's so funny. I actually woke up and the first thing that came to my mind was: I should make that correction, even before I read your remark. Last night when I wrote it, I just did not see it, and this morning it was so obvious. Either my eyes or my mind is playing tricks on me. May be both... Thank you for your kind words and for the attention you have been paying to my... let's call it a poetry. ;)))

Take good care. Sincerely...

Анатолий Макаров   18.11.2007 14:23   Заявить о нарушении
It's really a trifle, Anatol! What counts is that your verse evokes
deep and warm feelings which seem to be so rare today. And I appre-
ciate it above all.
Thanks for your prompt reaction and good words.

Valery

Валерий Шувалов   18.11.2007 21:51   Заявить о нарушении