Let's stay free,
free of emotions,
Free of pride,
free of cautions,
Free of prejudice,
free of lie,
Free to live,
free to die,
Free of society
with its moral,
Free to be silent,
free to quarrel,
Free to choose and
free to decline,
Free to accept,
free to change mind,
Free to feel,
free to be cold,
Free to act crazy,
free to grow old,
Free to lose,
free to cry,
Free to believe,
free to deny,
Free of chains,
free of oath,
Free to stay,
or go, or both,
Free to have,
free to give,
Free to be close,
free to leave,
Free to follow or
resist our fate,
Free to love,
free to hate.
24.08.05
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© Copyright: Марина Бурцева, 2007
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Not bad :)
Only "free of cations" - somewhat chemical, I wonder, and rather funnily (maybe cautions?)
Another misprint - "free to cHoose".
In general - I like it.
Владислав Тимошин 13.09.2007 07:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Only "free of cations" - somewhat chemical, I wonder, and rather funnily (maybe cautions?)
Another misprint - "free to cHoose".
In general - I like it.
Владислав Тимошин 13.09.2007 07:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Really those were(typed late at night), thanx for mentioning.
by the way, your misprint : funny
Марина Бурцева 13.09.2007 23:37 Заявить о нарушении
by the way, your misprint : funny
Марина Бурцева 13.09.2007 23:37 Заявить о нарушении
Did you mean "oddly or laughably"?
I haven't ever met such a strange combination as "rather funnily".
See you later,
yours sincerely.
p.s. when i answered for the 1st time i wasn't aware that your status is much high than mine.
Марина Бурцева 11.10.2007 13:00 Заявить о нарушении
I haven't ever met such a strange combination as "rather funnily".
See you later,
yours sincerely.
p.s. when i answered for the 1st time i wasn't aware that your status is much high than mine.
Марина Бурцева 11.10.2007 13:00 Заявить о нарушении