Be strong when things fall apart

If you can ever feel
That everything is boring,
That you already feel so bad
And no one’s there to help you,
Don’t leave all things to fall apart
If you may think it’s better,
Then stay and make it go right way
And never leave it on its own.
Before you’ve ever done the final steps
Just look at you in mirror,
You’ll see yours figure, looking sadly,
But tell yourself you’ll change it!


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Your poem is very optimistic!It inspires people to believe that they are able to change the thing they wish to,as if it says "never be sad,everything will be ok!"With respect,Diana!

Диана Давоян   09.09.2007 22:26     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, Diana, for that you understood what i wanted to tell everyone! I'm really optimistic person and i wish this poem to help those who need that at the moment!
With respect, Helena!)

Елена Шпаковская   10.09.2007 15:23   Заявить о нарушении