Walt Whitman, O Captain! - reflection

http://www.bartleby.com/142/193.html - O Captain! My Captain! Walt Whitman (1819–1892).

…and your dreams land in hails loud,
and smiles long.
True they come, forged they fall,
you last on.

O Captain, my Captain! Thy ship is still at sea,
O land of lands, O man of men, I beg, remain with me!
All objects won to daring heart, sought prizes are inwards.
Through wrecks and ills the victor sail, withstood against all odds.

I see the women through Walt’s eyes, that clocked their lives at bay.
To cheer return of valiant crew - regain their mates today.
I see no grim, just dead-clenched jaws that send a worrying gust.
Of sailors lined around a chest with standard half a mast.

Rise captain! Rise! Betray us not! Stay faithful to your men.
Command all lips cry – welcome home, and not, to croon amen.

But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies
Fallen cold and dead.

Land – take the body, seas – the soul, O Captian, Captain kind!
Thy battleship is my lifeboat - to You, again, assigned.


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Oh Fern, it's so beautiful, so melodic, so amazingly magical... It's enchanting! I was reading it aloud - and it really touched my heart.
Thank you so much!

Лунная Фокс   17.10.2008 16:45     Заявить о нарушении
Hello again! :) Thank you for such an expressive comment, Foxy! To tell you the truth, the original poem still makes my heart sing and cry at the same time too. Thank you again!

Fern   19.10.2008 01:34   Заявить о нарушении