Sooner or later... My sunny side

Sooner or later… I know I will make you mine
Then I will turn your tears into the sweetest wine
Strange but I still don’t know your name
Ocean of faces and I go insane

One day you’ll come to me, we’ll be learning to fly
Light as a wind we shall live in the mist of sky
And you’ll forget what your tears were about
You’ll never awake into weakness of doubt


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Your English is above reproach and the verse is beautiful. I'm surprised to be the first one to review it. You should put some of your poetry on my website so more people can access it. But I must tell you that I am just building the site and I'm very slow. You can check it out if you like and if you are interested in being one of the writers there just let me know and we would be honored to have you. The main site is Zeuxidos, which is where Леон Татис will have his beautiful art. We had some set backs in the Art Gallery and so I started working on a poetry workshop on the site. Eventually I hope for the poets to be able to sign in and post their own work but right now I don't know enough about the codes and forms and such and my study has not progressed enough to be able to do it at this time. If my efforts do not produce something soon then I will have to get someone to finish building it.

Your poem is beautifully written and expressed. It was a pleasure....Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   14.05.2007 07:14     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you one more time ))) I would gladly put my poetry on your site (I don't care if your site is not too "Cool" ). If it's impossible to do now for me I would gladly rely on your help (I mean that you could do it).
It's possible for me even to make record of my reading (singing) these verses to show how I want everybody to take it.
Yours Feudor

Федор Клочков   14.05.2007 22:07   Заявить о нарушении
You are completely free to do whatever you wish on the website. Right now if you will tell what you want on there then I will put it for you. If you need to put it yourself then I can give you all my passwords and information and you can do it yourself. You are probably more computer literate than I am presently. If you will send me what you would like then I will add you to the site. Include any pictures you would like and music and verse, and anything else you would like to write about yourself or your work. You can e-mail it to me at suedubois@sbcglobal.net. The Russian Verse must be mailed in a word document (as an attachment) if you add your Russian verse as well because for some reason my e-mail distorts it. It will be great to have you on the site. Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   14.05.2007 22:51   Заявить о нарушении
PS: haha :)) It's such a shame I don't know how to do a cool site. I need to spend more time studying "How to" :)) Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   14.05.2007 22:57   Заявить о нарушении
Huge thanks!!! I'm certainly not much more computer literate than you
so I think I should just tell you what I want on there. I need some time to think... Oh! I just made a draw in Photoshop with my vision of the page.
P.S. It's just like your name & surname now for me - Hugs Sue )))
Your Feudor

Федор Клочков   15.05.2007 00:00   Заявить о нарушении
Take all the time you need and when you are ready you can send them to me. Thats Great! Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   15.05.2007 02:38   Заявить о нарушении
... All night long... Receive!!!

Федор Клочков   15.05.2007 07:00   Заявить о нарушении
Send you the mail. That was the restless night.
Waiting for your answear!!!

Федор Клочков   15.05.2007 08:05   Заявить о нарушении
Oh, your page is COOL, maybe I should get you to do the entire site :)) My computer didn't want to open it right. It gave me all the pictures as individuals and not on the page so I'm not sure what order you would like them in. But, that is only a glitch that we can work out. waiting to hear back from you......Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   15.05.2007 11:45   Заявить о нарушении
PS: Sorry for taking so long to answer. I have been painting my house so I went to bed early and I think when it is day here it is night where you. Hugs Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   15.05.2007 16:00   Заявить о нарушении
In a few hours (couple) I'll make the final model. I'll wright about what I want. Maybe I'll make a draw. Sorry I'm not too experienced.
Yours Feudor

Федор Клочков   15.05.2007 16:52   Заявить о нарушении
In a few hours (couple) I'll make the final model. I'll wright about what I want. Maybe I'll make a draw. Sorry I'm not too experienced.
Yours Feudor

Федор Клочков   15.05.2007 16:52   Заявить о нарушении
yes, I put the page the way you had it so you can look at it. Send me the final version and I will make all the corrections. This will be the link. On the first picture with the Verses and Songs, I was not sure what you wanted to link to there so I linked to this site. You can let me know and I can change that. I just wanted to get it started for you. Hugs Sue.......PS I am going to be in and out today but I will check my e-mail and here for any messages.

Мэтти Дубоис   15.05.2007 18:45   Заявить о нарушении
I got your final model and I will be working on it tonight. It looks great...Sue

Мэтти Дубоис   16.05.2007 03:31   Заявить о нарушении