I was suffering because of my diffidence,
I was not brave enough to go on.
I am tired of people’s indifference.
I have turned off my faith and my phone.
I have paid for my last inconsistence
I have paid the highest possible price,
Can you help me return my persistence?
Can you help me to find something nice?
Help yourself
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Well written and a nice play on words. Also I can appreciate the use of the feminine end rhymes you use in this piece since it is not often seen in English. To be self assured, would be nice but a person that is continually evaluating themself has a tendency to be very hard on themself. But when we put a few satisfactory accomplishments under our belt we can rest a little easier, even though we tend to expect great things from ourself, even more so than we do of others. I truly enjoyed yoru poem it has a beautiful rhythm and it is brilliantly expressed.
Your friend
Sue
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Your friend
Sue
Мэтти Дубоис 06.01.2007 00:30 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for this really good advice! I really have a tendency of too much self-evaluation.
And all I need sometimes is just relax and enjoy what I have.
P.S. I think you’ve got my idea that the answer for the last two questions in the poem lies in the name of it.
Best wishes,
Tanya
Мирра Л -Английский 06.01.2007 10:03 Заявить о нарушении
And all I need sometimes is just relax and enjoy what I have.
P.S. I think you’ve got my idea that the answer for the last two questions in the poem lies in the name of it.
Best wishes,
Tanya
Мирра Л -Английский 06.01.2007 10:03 Заявить о нарушении