Отклик на стихотворение Анатолия Гурутука "Утоли меня, Мадонна":
http://www.stihi.ru/2006/10/06-2074
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Вы твердили про любовь,
"Утоли!" - просить посмели;
много нежных было слов,
чтоб добиться своей цели...
Я бы рада утолить
и восторги, и печали...
Но мне надо скромной быть,
чтоб Вы обо мне мечтали,
чтобы Вас пленял мой взор
и кивок мой незаметный!..
Плод ведь сладок до тех пор,
пока он для Вас запретный!
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Запретный плод сладок!
© Copyright: Аня Аксенова, 2006
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Чем больше запрещаешь, тем больше и хочется - закон жизни:)
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Доброе утро, Аннушка!
Вячеслав Знакомый 24.07.2015 08:23 • Заявить о нарушении
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Доброе утро, Аннушка!
Вячеслав Знакомый 24.07.2015 08:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Так сладок тот запретный плод,
Что просится скорее в рот! ;)
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Так и есть! ))) Проверено! ;)
Доброе утро, Славушка! :)
Анюта Аксёнова 24.07.2015 09:06 Заявить о нарушении
Что просится скорее в рот! ;)
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Так и есть! ))) Проверено! ;)
Доброе утро, Славушка! :)
Анюта Аксёнова 24.07.2015 09:06 Заявить о нарушении
Автору виднее! ;)
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С улыбашками-обнимашками )))
Анюта Аксёнова 31.10.2015 20:32 Заявить о нарушении
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Анюта Аксёнова 31.10.2015 20:32 Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо, Славуля! И тебе мой приветик! А ещё с Хеллуином! :)
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