To my friends

I am not the greatest speaker,
English knowledge is so little.
 If I want to say “a board”,
It might sound like “a bird”.
Please don’t hurry press Abort,
probably I mind “Support”
and if article is worth
do not treat it as the worst.
 True, thanks God, I have a friend
Who is able understand.
I appreciate so much
He has never missed-me-match.


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Warm & amazing!
The 8-th line, perhaps, "Who is able TO understand"?

Елена Заостровцева   06.04.2010 08:19     Заявить о нарушении
По грамматике-то да, нужен инфинитив. А как с ритмом?

Борис Идельчик   06.04.2010 15:23   Заявить о нарушении