Trying to live with this pain

Hard to believe - I am dying...
Cancer is killing my brain.
I can rethink it. I'm trying...
Trying to live with this pain!

People's specific reaction
Showed me the sense of the world.
I could be helped by injection...
Wouldn't feel lonely and cold.
Wouldn't explain why I'm crying
Looking at flowers and rain...
Trust me it's dim but I'm trying...
Trying to live with this pain.


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Joana, I do hope this is just a poetry, not reality. Otherwise it`s awfully sad.
I enjoyed your style, thanks a bunch!
Regards,
Lena

Елена Васильева-Сол   16.02.2007 17:14     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks a lot for these words and attention)))
I'm glad you liked it.
Best wishes,
JO

Асия Верникова   16.02.2007 17:30   Заявить о нарушении
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