After million years

Иван Анохин
It's so fine and warm in There,
It's so easy for me There;
And you call me There
Again...
May be, it wasn't me? Or it's just a dream,
Dream about my past life
When I didn't feel pain?

And I break my cruel fate,
And I come to you, my mate,
And I see your tender glance...
Our time has come -
Oh! it is too late...
We will die tomorrow
But we have a chance

That

We'll return in There
And stop shed our tears;
We will meet somewhere
After million years.


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Dear Ivan!
Can I say a few words about eternal "snow"?

Million years ago
I had my dream under snow.
We will return after death
It's only a common sense.

Snow and snow again.
This is a sweet pain!
Our glance to this world enjoys
Now had come an eternity toys.

I wish you creative success!
Sincerely, W.

As usual, this is not quite English, but my proto English ... Do not judge strictly.

Владимир Рузанов 7   27.03.2025 10:10   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Спасибо за отзыв, действительно, есть некоторые параллели в стихотворениях.)

С уважением,
И. Анохин.

Иван Анохин   27.03.2025 14:22   Заявить о нарушении
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