I m hungry for the inspiration

I'm hungry for the inspiration,
I'm really dying for its lack,
I'm waiting for the aspiration
To touch my soul behind my back.

I cannot live without writing,
My life is nothing without it,
Cannot imagine how exciting
My life could be just for a bit

Without rhymes, without verses,
Without all that gives me light,
Without the things the world proposes
And makes my life so nice and bright.

07.02.2006


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Svetlana!

I liked your poem.
Look,please, in the line "I cannot leave without writing..." maybe you meant: "I cannot LIVE..."

Thank you very much for visiting my page.
Frieda.

Фрида Шутман   05.09.2007 08:55     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much for your notes, Frieda.
I have done the corrections.

With Best regards,
Svetlana

Светлана Фатеева   11.09.2007 21:24   Заявить о нарушении
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