Delivering the dream

You’re my sunrise…you’re my gulp of the sweetest air…
And my life prize…- your heart beating in my ear…
Once…

How can Those words…turn into the Real ones…
How can Those hopes…become the True ones…
Here…

Close now my eyes…I’m in Heaven I can hear…
Every Breath…of your Heart…and I feel you…only you...my Dear


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“only you” – how nice and lyrical! Reminded me immediately the “Only you” song by Elvis.

Welcome to my world, too, dear Thunder! I believe you will be able to find some little “perals” here and there – some of them are with foreign flavor like yours.

Михаил Хитрик   12.05.2006 16:45     Заявить о нарушении
Sorry for typo - of course, I meant “pearls”.

Михаил Хитрик   12.05.2006 16:49   Заявить о нарушении
Elvis*

Only you can make all this world seem bright
Only you can make the darkness bright
Only you and you alone can thrill me like you do
And fill my heart with love for only you
......
...
The magic that you do
You're my dream come true
My one and only you

Красивая песня, сладие слова))
спасибо, что сравнили мою с этой :)
I will definitely read your pearls

Vj

Thunder   14.05.2006 02:03   Заявить о нарушении
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