Merry count

One

The elefant is lonly one.
He's very sad in big savanne.
He doesn't speak when sun and moon
Let's send him letter very soon.

Two

Two very largest crocodiles
Look at the animals from Nile.
They're very lazy drive for fishes,
But very want to have the dishes.

Three

Three rapid birds
Tell us some words:
We're very cold and can't to sing
And want to know when comes the spring?

Four

Four little monkeys jump and look
They want to read the interesting book.
But they must wait for one more year.
They'll go to school and study there.

Five

Five flowers wave their eyelashes,
They call to play Ann, Kate and Alex.
The bush is far from our city,
But we'll make there our meeting.

Six

We have six apples on the branch,
But can't to eat all them on lunch.
We'll add to it a lot of plums
And cook fruit salad for the Mums!

Seven

The squirrel hided seven nuts
Under the leaves of trees at night.
But winter covered it by snow
And in the spring the nuts will grow.

Eight

Eight mice are playing with the cat,
But we advise them be afraid.
Because the cat doesn't want to play
And can to eat all mice one day.

Nine

Me and Mummy went street down
Kept the windows account.
Saw the house big and nice,
It had nine windows equal size.

Ten

We want to go to child care
It's full of our friends there.
And how many girls and boys?
Exactly ten are playing toys.


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Nice rhymes, but you've made some grammar mistakes. E.g.
Two
Two very largest crocodiles
Look at the animals from Nile.
They're very lazy drive for fishes,
But very want to have the dishes.

You may correct the first TWO (^-^) lines in such a way:
Two very giant crocodiles
Look at animals from the Nile.

And the second TWO lines in the following way:
They are too lazy to catch fish,
But they are fond of lovely dish.

Ирина Крикунова   09.03.2010 18:24     Заявить о нарушении
Ирина, спасибо за замечание.

Татьяна Александрова   09.03.2010 21:55   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.