Здравствуй Крым
На дороге, извилистой
Своей прямотой...
Солнце, прибой и берег,
И вновь... звёздный путь...
Луна, берег, прибой...
Волнение на полосе,
Где берег встречался с морем,
Камни ворочая... с волной... игра.
Игривое дитя ночи,
Непреступная днем улыбка,
А ночью в тихих омутах бирюза.
Квартира, вещи, вокзал...
Дорога, вокзал, - здравствуй Крым...
Выпил вино, природа, звёзды,
И я наг и открыт... как родник...
Молчу, только шумят волны...
Впадаю в природы лоно...
Из своей души родника пресного...
Качусь... в чёрное море солёное.
И не тесно... всем нам...
Здесь, на краю звездопада...
Маяки глаз и сердец... темно...
И в море и в небе звёзды...
Где мы? Кто мы? — Но нам светло...
Вокруг миров мириады...
Чайка с волной играет,
Надеваю очки – пена…
Хорошо, что жив мечтами…
Этого вечного света.
Света... И ты... улыбаешься,
— А-а, хорошо?!
Конечно хорошо, не спорь,
Если без слов песня спета.
Крым – звёздный остров надежды.
Из-за горизонта медленно солнце встаёт
Спелым персиком на ладонях морской пучины…
Зима, где ты. Гребни волн машут пенно…
Крым не волнуй, успокой меня…
Чайка белая… где ты?
Луна сонной лощины...
~*~
[Style: Blade Runner Ambient Jazz, Analog Synth Fusion, Muted Jazz Guitar Articulation]
[Tempo: 84 BPM, steady with rubato textures]
[Key: E minor / modal interchange with A major, B Dorian coloration]
[Time Signature: 4/4]
[Instruments: Muted Fender Jazz Guitar, Electric Grand Piano, Layered Analog Synths (Lead & Pad), Orchestral Drums (Brushwork), Glockenspiel, Deep Sub Bass, Stereo Xylophone, Vinyl Crackle FX]
[VERSE 1: Am – Fmaj7 – Dm7 – E7]
So many questions appeared
On the winding road
Cutting truth through silence
With its stubborn line.
[Guitar: Palm-muted arpeggios (Am - Fmaj7 - Dm7 - E7), subtle delay on the chords to create an ethereal atmosphere.]
[Piano: Mid-range chords (Am - Fmaj7 - Dm7 - E7), using light sustain, harmonizing with guitar’s voicings.]
[Synth: A slow-moving pad (Am - Fmaj7 - Dm7 - E7), filtered with LFO for a drifting texture.]
[Drums: Soft brushwork on snare, light cymbals to keep it ambient.]
[VERSE 2: F – G – Am – E7sus4 ; E7]
Sunlight, the shore, and tide,
Then again… the stars ignite.
Moonlight, the shore, the tide…
Ancient pulse, returning light.
[Guitar: Soft staccato rhythm (F - G - Am - E7), subtle wah for a dreamy feel.]
[Piano: Chordal movement (F - G - Am - E7sus4 ; E7) with a fluid, sustained feel.]
[Synth: Lead synth provides atmospheric legato lines (G4 - A4 - B4) to accompany vocal melody.]
[Drums: Percussion lightly accentuates the movement with brushwork and small snare hits.]
[VERSE 3: Dm7 – G – Em7 – Am]
Trembling on the line
Where sea and coast unite,
Stones shift with every wave —
A game of time and tide.
[Guitar: Arpeggio plucks with delay effects, giving a fluid but slightly uncertain feel.]
[Piano: Sparse harmony (Dm7 - G - Em7 - Am), adding color to the melody.]
[Synth: Soft, slow-moving pad creates a growing sense of depth as the verse progresses.]
[Drums: Light percussion with a soft ride cymbal and light snare taps.]
[VERSE 4: Fmaj7 – G – Am – C/G – E7]
Night’s playful child
Hides behind the smile of day.
But deep in silent midnight —
Turquoise eyes betray.
[Guitar: Soft muted strums (Fmaj7 - G - Am), with an intricate fingerpicking style adding texture.]
[Piano: Fluid voicing (Fmaj7 - G - Am - C/G - E7), minimal sustain to allow space for the vocals.]
[Synth: A deep, atmospheric pad holds the harmony, adding depth to the vocal line.]
[Drums: Brushes on snare, with accents on the cymbals for subtle percussive texture.]
[VERSE 5: Dm7 – Em – Am – G]
One flat. The bags. The station.
The train. The track. “Hello, Crimea.”
Wine, stars, and silence sing —
I’m bare, like a stream.
[Guitar: Clean, smooth chords (Dm7 - Em - Am - G), adding warmth and intimacy to the verse.]
[Piano: Light chordal phrases (Dm7 - Em - Am - G), with some offbeat accents to match the syncopation in the vocals.]
[Synth: Light, rhythmic stabs (Am - G), with a low-filtered swell.]
[Drums: Minimal brushwork, focusing on the ride cymbal and soft snare to create the heartbeat-like feel of the lyrics.]
[Final of Part One]
[[Part Two]]
[INSTRUMENTAL REFRAIN | Chords: Cmaj7 – Am – Dm – G – E7]
[Lead Guitar & Piano: Unison melody (Cmaj7 - Am - Dm - G - E7), with synth floating above for atmospheric texture.]
[Synth: Deep, atmospheric pads interweaving between the guitar and piano, providing space and motion.]
[VERSE 6: Dm7 – Em7 – Am – E]
I’m quiet… only waves speak,
Falling into nature’s hands.
From my freshwater soul
I slip… into salt lands.
[Guitar: Soft strumming (Dm7 - Em7 - Am - E), creating a flowing motion.]
[Piano: Light harmonic support (Dm7 - Em7 - Am - E), adding an introspective feel.]
[Synth: Pads swell with atmospheric movement (Dm7 - Em7 - Am - E), creating a sense of transitioning.]
[Drums: Brushwork with subtle cymbal textures, very light percussion to enhance the mood.]
[VERSE 7: F – G – Am – Em7 – Dsus2 – E7]
There’s space for all of us,
Where the stardust rains.
Eyes — like silent beacons.
Hearts — like burning flames.
[Guitar: Muted staccato rhythm (F - G - Am - Em7 - Dsus2 - E7), with a bit of reverb for dreaminess.]
[Piano: Chords move fluidly with the lyrics (F - G - Am - Em7 - Dsus2 - E7).]
[Synth: Layered pads and leads for a sweeping, emotional feel.]
[Drums: Light hi-hat accents with snare hits and cymbal washes, subtly driving the movement.]
[Final of Part Two]
[[Part Three]]
[VERSE 8: Fmaj7 – C – G/B – Am]
Stars in sea and sky alike…
Where are we? Who are we?
Still we float, still we glow
Round galaxies unknown.
[Guitar: Smooth chord strumming (Fmaj7 - C - G/B - Am), adding a feeling of wonder.]
[Piano: Chordal play (Fmaj7 - C - G/B - Am) with a gentle rise.]
[Synth: Swelling atmospheric pads (Fmaj7 - C - G/B - Am) to reflect the celestial imagery.]
[Drums: Subtle percussion, focusing on cymbals and light snares.]
[VERSE 9: Dm7 – F – E7 – Am]
Gull and wave still playing.
Foam rises through my lens.
Good to live by dreaming —
By this endless light again.
[Guitar: Arpeggiated rhythm (Dm7 - F - E7 - Am), with slight delay and chorus.]
[Piano: Chords (Dm7 - F - E7 - Am) with emotional depth, slow sustain.]
[Synth: Atmospheric swells to mirror the lyrics.]
[Drums: Light cymbal washes, subtle brushwork for a reflective finish.]
[OUTRO: Am – G – Fmaj7 – E7]
[Soft synth arpeggio, jazz guitar harmonics, ambient fade with sea FX and bells.]
[Final of Part Three]
[End]
p.s. Это вторая песня созданная в новом музыкальном стиле Ambient Jazz Ballad, но если в первой песне ещё было экспериментирование с методами и приемами аранжировки, то в этой песне был найден рецепт музыкального звучания и стиля, что делает его узнаваемым и своеобразным. Краткое описание стиля дам в отдельном обзоре когда песен и инструментальных композиций, которых тоже уже несколько будет намного больше.
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