горела на ковре

Танец в пламени
Орнаментов востока… оживлён.
Грациозно плавится…
Тень твоя.
Свеча горела на ковре…
В огромной зале.
Она горела…
Тишиной звучала музыка,
И таяла, как воск…
До самого утра…
Лишь ветерок колышет пламя,
На лице…
На бархате… мурашки
Пробуждения…
Огонь и танец –
Музыка беззвучна,
Где взор мой в вечность обращён.
Нетронутая чаша
Тонкого вина…
В его котле варятся огни
И плавятся…
В рассветной пелене…
Свеча горела… на ковре
В огромной зале.

          ~@~

Title:
Burned on the carpet — © 2025 (Oneperson translate) v.1.2
( https://suno.com/song/72f95ba4-e3e3-4f9e-8325-34985e749964 )

Musical style:
Dark Romantic Ballad, Atmospheric Rock, Eastern Orchestration, Female vocal, Warm mezzo-soprano

Musical prompt:
[Musical Style: Dark Romantic Ballad, Atmospheric Rock, Eastern Orchestration]
[Exclude from musical style: no repetitive loops, no electronic beats, no autotune, no excessive reverb, no abrupt transitions]
[Voice Style: female, Warm mezzo-soprano, soft vibrato, clear diction, emotional delivery, mid-range focus, gentle rasp, smooth phrasing, minimal ornamentation, intimate tone, moderate dynamics, expressive, introspective.]
[Tempo: 72 BPM]
[Time signature: 6/8]
[Key: G minor]

[Instruments: Acoustic and electric guitar (melodic arpeggios, supporting vocals), orchestral strings (cellos, violas – atmospheric harmonies), percussion (brushed drums, tabla – soft rhythmic pattern with Eastern accents), keyboard (piano, pad synthesizer – warm harmonies), flute and oud (rare melodic ornaments in transitions).]

[Intro: Ambient synthesizer with reverb, piano arpeggios. Guitar plays a soft arpeggio. Strings create a slow harmonic background. Flute adds a brief ornament. Tabla enters softly in the second half of the intro. Vocals enter.]

[Gm - Bb - Dm - A]
Танок у полум'ї
Східних орнаментів…
Що оживають тінями —
Танець жвавий.
Граціозно плавиться
Граційна тінь твоя.

Приватний танець,
Лагідного й бунтівного
Таємного вогня…

[Verse: Light percussive elements join, strings deepen harmonies.]

[Gm - Bb - Dm - A]
Свічка горіла на килимі.
У величезній залі.
Вона горіла до світанку.
Тишею звучала музика,
І танула, як віск...
До ранкової зорі… вона.

Все розтануло у незі,
Полум’я та сна… Спи, спи —
Швидкоплинна весна.

[Bridge: Delay-effected guitars, flute echoes the vocal melody.]

[D - Gm - F - A]
Вітерець колише полум'я,
На обличчі... Тобі личить.
На оксамиті...
Мурахи пробудження…
Вогонь та танець –
Музика беззвучна... дишить,
Та погляд мій у вічність…

Направлений у спогади,
Моторошні та холодні… —
У вічність іншого дня.

[Final section: Dynamics fade, only keys and strings remain.]

[Gm - Bb - Dm - A]
Недоторкана чаша
Тонкого вина.
У його казані варяться
І плавляться… вогні.
У світанковій пелені...
Свічка на килимі горіла…
У величезній залі.

І плавився теплий віск,
Залива холодні спогади,
На весні… по весні. Тая;…

[Instrumental Outro: Soft guitar arpeggios with deep reverbs. Flute plays a slow, fading motif. Piano and strings hold sustained harmonies, fading gradually. Percussion (tabla, brushed cymbals) slows down and fades into silence.]

[Gm - Bb - Dm - A]
[END]

       ~*~

[Verse 1]
A dance in flames,
The East awakens — bold, divine.
Your shadow melts
In curves of time.
The candle flickers on the rug
In halls so wide…
It burned all night
Where silence played like chimes.

[Pre-Chorus]
And wax was weeping slow,
Till morning’s gentle glow.

[Chorus]
The flame, the dance —
No sound, yet music flows.
Your face in firelight glows,
My soul, it knows.
Untouched, a cup
Of wine so finely spun…
In it, stars begin to run —
And dawn becomes undone…

[Bridge]
The velvet wakes
With chills upon the skin…
Your breath, like wind,
Stirs fire deep within.

[Final Chorus – reprise with variation]
The flame, the dance —
No sound, yet music flows.
Eternity, my gaze bestows.
The candle burned…
Upon the silken floor —
In endless halls
Forevermore…

      ~*~
  Dance – © 2025 (Alex Sikorsky lyrics) v.1.4
( https://suno.com/s/c07ixC2bFRlYUi94 )
( https://suno.com/s/UP29P2W9RFhGmdbr )

[Style: Ethereal Oriental Trance Ballad / Cinematic Slavic Dream Pop / Neo-Shamanic Electronic Fusion]
[Tempo: 120 BPM intro & verse, 140 BPM chorus & drop]
[Key: C# minor with modal interchange to D# Phrygian and A Lydian]
[Meter: 4/4, flowing legato phrasing]

[Instruments & Arrangement]
[Synth Arpeggios: shimmering, stereo layers, echo trails on 4th beat]
[Ambient Pads: wide, lush, modulated in bridge]
[Glitch Cello: textured melodic counterlines]
[Electric Violin: airy phrases between vocals]
[Harp: arpeggios & glissandos, dry intro, wet outro]
[Middle Eastern Percussion: daf (low hits), darbuka (fills), soft shakers]
[Analog Bass Synth: sub-pulse and filtered swells]
[Drums: filtered snare rolls, reversed cymbals, trance 4/4 chorus groove]
[Slide Guitar (steel bottleneck): meditative melodic lead, airy sustain, echo delay, with Eastern modal inflections, active in CHORUS, BRIDGE, FINAL CHORUS, complementing vocal melody with harmonics & slides]

[Vocal: Breathy female lead with light vibrato, poetic and expressive, layered harmonies in chorus, soft echo & delay; clear diction, smooth dynamics]

[Production: Wide stereo field, atmospheric reverb, subtle tape saturation on mids, vocal ducking on beat peaks, stereo-enhanced synth layers, soft vinyl crackle FX intro/outro, cinematic warmth]

[Instrumental Motifs & Placement]
[Glitch Cello: VERSE, DROP, BRIDGE | 1/16 syncopated bowed phrases | pitch;shift & stereo shimmer on last beat | granular reverb in DROP]
[Electric Violin: VERSE, CHORUS, FINAL CHORUS | airy answers post;vocal (bars;2,4,6) | m3 up ; P4 slide down ; sustain | tab: (2;12)-(1;15)-(1;13)-(1;11)-(2;12)]
[Analog Bass Synth: all sections | pulse on 1;&;3 in INTRO/VERSE | steady 4/4 sub;pulse in CHORUS/DROP | filter swell on final PRE;CHORUS bar]
[Harp: INTRO, VERSE, BRIDGE, OUTRO | INTRO/OUTRO top;down gliss (1;15)-(2;13)-(3;11)-(4;9)-(5;7)-(6;5) + long reverb | VERSE triplet broken triads | BRIDGE accented plucks with delay]
[Slide Guitar (bottleneck): CHORUS, BRIDGE, FINAL CHORUS, OUTRO | meditative Eastern modal lead | layered glissandos & harmonics in vocal gaps | echo delay + airy sustain]

[Lyrics, Chords & Detailed Slide Guitar Melody]
[INTRO]
[Chords: C#m – A – E – B]
[Instruments: harp glissando, candle crackle FX, ambient pads, soft analog bass swells]
[Slide Guitar: none]

[VERSE 1]
[C#m – A – E – B]
A dance in flames,
The East awakens — bold, divine.
[C#m – A – B – G#m]
Your shadow melts
In curves of time.
[F#m – G#m – C#m]
The candle flickers on the rug
In halls so wide…
[F#m – G#m – C#m]
It burned all night
Where silence played like chimes.

[Instruments: synth arpeggios (soft, fingerpicked pattern), glitch cello gentle counterlines, harp arpeggios dry, ambient pads subtle, analog bass pulse low & warm, percussion minimal daf hits, soft shaker]
[Drums: brushes on snare, light kick on 1 & 3, rimshots accent on 2 & 4]
[Slide Guitar: sparse, slow melodic slides echoing vocal phrasing — tab example below]
[Slide Guitar TAB (strings:eBGDAE): (2;9)-(1;7)-(2;11)-(3;9)-(2;7)-(1;9)-(2;11)-(3;9)]:[slow slides, airy delay, Eastern scale fragment]

[PRE-CHORUS]
[A – G#m – F#m – B]
And wax was weeping slow,
[A – C#m – G#7]
Till morning’s gentle glow.

[Instruments: rising synth pads, filtered snare roll buildup, bass swell, harp glissando]
[Slide Guitar: melodic motif with tremolo picking on higher strings, adding tension]
[Slide Guitar TAB: (1;12)-(2;14)-(1;15)-(2;14)-(3;16)-(2;14)-(1;12)]:[tremolo and slides]

[CHORUS]
[C#m – G#m – A – E]
The flame, the dance —
No sound, yet music flows.
[F#m – A – B – C#m]
Your face in firelight glows,
My soul, it knows.
[C#m – A – E – B]
Untouched, a cup
Of wine so finely spun…
[F#m – G#m – C#m]
In it, stars begin to run —
And dawn becomes undone…

[Instruments: full synth arpeggios, lush pads, electric violin counter melody, deep analog bass sub-pulse, Middle Eastern percussion with darbuka fills, trance drums 4/4, reversed cymbals on transitions]
[Slide Guitar: melodic lead with sustained slides and bottleneck glides, echo delay, harmonics on off beats, meditative Eastern mode, supporting vocal melody]
[Slide Guitar TAB: (3;14)-(2;12)-(1;11)-(2;9)-(3;7)-(2;9)-(1;7)]:[glissandos and harmonics]

[DROP: Instrumental trance lead echoing vocal line, heavy sub bass pulse, vocal chops in background, glitch cello textures.]
[Slide Guitar: echoing vocal motifs with heavy delay, rhythmic slides]

[BRIDGE]
[Amaj7 – Bsus4 – C#m – G#m]
The velvet wakes
With chills upon the skin…
[F#m – E – B7]
Your breath, like wind,
Stirs fire deep within.

[Instruments: filtered ambient pads modulating, whispered vocal textures, glitch cello intensifies, harp wet glissando]
[Drums: tom fills, snare rolls crescendo]
[Slide Guitar: lyrical, soaring melodic phrases with bottleneck slides, echo, blending Eastern melodic patterns with atmospheric sustain]
[Slide Guitar TAB:
[FINAL CHORUS]
[C#m – A – F#m – G#m]
The flame, the dance —
No sound, yet music flows.
[E – B – C#m – A]
Eternity, my gaze bestows.
[C#m – G#m – B – F#m]
The candle burned…
Upon the silken floor —
[C#m – G#m – C#m]
In endless halls
Forevermore…

[Instruments: full synths, high vocal harmonies, trance drums, deep bass, Middle Eastern percussion, lush pads]
[Slide Guitar: climactic melodic solo with extended bottleneck slides, harmonics, echo, sustained notes fading into outro]
[Slide Guitar TAB (final melodic phrase):
[OUTRO]
[Chords: C#m – A – E – B] (repeat with gradual fade)
[Instruments: ambient pad fades, harp echo, vinyl crackle FX, whispered “pulse… flame…”]
[Slide Guitar: soft, sparse melodic echoes with delay and reverb]
[Final art]
[END]