to the dream...

I’ll take you to the sky…
The sunrise’s coming soon…
But now I want to fly…
Just fly and watch the moon.

Above the silly streets…
I want to take your hand…
And jump... to lanes and deeps…
But it is not the the end…

We’ll fly… wirthout wings.
We’ll face this world and wind.
I know so many things…
Now…
And I just want to be…
… flying away…
……from vanity….
………to the dream…


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That’s really good poem! I also have written a poem with similar meaning recently. It’s called “Carry me to the sky” and it was inspired by someone else’s poem and my own dreams, without a reflection of them in real life, unfortunately…

Every one in the lifetime wants to fly,
Wants to make that magic dream true…
Only love that really does,
After what we were going through
Sky exists not for “me”, but for “us”.


This is a response to your verse.

Best wishes,
Mirra L

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   07.12.2006 01:17     Заявить о нарушении
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