The wind is blowing on my mind

The wind is blowing on my mind,
It’s crying, screaming hole the night,
I’m seeing my tears on the check,
I’m feeling bad, I’m tired, sick.

I dream about you and me,
I want to be with you and see
How wonderful is our life,
I look at clock – about five.

Oh, Gods, please, stop this loudly cry,
I want to sleep, I’m trying… try…
I can’t see you, It’s very hard,
Because you  have a lonely heart.

*** Декабрь, 2004г.


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I think there is not just a wind
we are MANKIND you've to be proud
and even when the skies look dim
we may be glad and sing aloud

Вот такой простенький экспромт :))

Алексей Костромин   21.03.2005 19:19     Заявить о нарушении
Экспормт сияет искренностью и доброжелательностью - спасибо большое, очень приятно -)
Буду следовать вашим инструкциям! Уже подпеваю под песенку "From Paris to Berlin", улыбаюсь и радуюсь жизни -)

Юлия Улис   21.03.2005 23:54   Заявить о нарушении
The wind is blowing on my mind,
It’s crying, screaming *W*hole the night,
I’m seeing my tears on the cheEk, (I see off my tears on the cheEk)
I’m feeling bad, I’m tired, sick.

I dream about you and me,
I want to be with you and see
How wonderful is our life,
I look at WATCH – about five.

Oh, Gods, please, stop this loud* cry,
I want to sleep, I’m trying… try…
I can’t see you, It’s very hard,
Because you have a lonely heart.

Not so sure about usage of Gerund (probably "see off" was meant). Good luck :)

Сергей Лузан   24.03.2005 13:48   Заявить о нарушении