Dream

It showered and rained
Non stop for a week
My days were ruined
My nights were bleak

Now weather is better
Grass is emerald green
I dreamed of a stranger
With dark eyes, olive skin

I was in another,
Not this universe
We were together
Dance in rhythmical verse

Was it glimpse of my future
Or my previous life
Mortal man, seraph creature
Will you make me your wife?

The impossible lightness
Unbelievable peace
Hug, I cling to your brightness
And I hardly can breathe

So, you're not an angel?
Serenade is so sweet
You are probably Devil
Angel my Seraphim.

Love, eternity promised
Make me happy - your goal
When desires are pleased
Will you then take my soul?


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"Это было в другой вселенной,
Не в этой,
Танцевали мы вместе
Под строчки поэта" :-)

"Dance in rhythmical verse" is the most wonderful poetical discovery I have come across recently.

Thanks a lot.

Геннадий Казакевич   24.07.2004 04:02     Заявить о нарушении
Dear Gennadi

I am sorry, that I missed your note. Was to busy at work. Thank you for the kind appraisal. Somehow I like "Witch" and "Spanish dance" more, then "Dream".

How are you? It is much more fun to hear from someone you know, rather then from complete strangers…

Thank you for nice translation piece. I tried myself to translate Witch to Russian, but cannot get the rhythm to flow.

Cheers
Anel

А Н Е Л   06.08.2004 08:45   Заявить о нарушении
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