Родник - Our soul is the source of God

Наша душа –
Божий родник…
высший Закон –
Как мы вершим.

Божий Закон
высший  Завет
Этот Закон
В небо ведёт?
Или в себя
Заглянуть  нам
Всё же придётся
И просмотреть
Дно у колодца
Или прочистить стенки -
Родник
Должен быть чистым
И голубым
Чтобы испить захотелось водицы
И отдохнуть у воды…
Как в светлице-
Чтоб чистотой он заблестел,
Чтобы другим подарил 
Чудо  -
Диво, как хороша
Голубая вода -
Та, что есть в нас.
Ею мы  правим?
Или …теряем?
Иль осветлим?
Или в грязи:
Зарастёт вода тиной
И у …болота лягушки …
Иль… в льдинах
Наша душа –
Божий родник…

Божий Закон –
Как мы вершим…

версия 2 (с припевом):

Божий Закон
высший  Завет
Этот Закон
В небо ведёт?
Или в себя
Заглянуть  нам
Всё же придётся

И просмотреть
Дно у колодца
Или прочистить стенки -
Родник
Должен быть чистым
И голубым.

Чтобы испить захотелось водицы
И отдохнуть у воды…
Как в светлице-
Чтоб чистотой он заблестел,
Чтобы другим подарил
Чудо  -
Диво

как хороша
Голубая вода -
Та, что есть в нас.
Ею мы  правим?
Или …теряем?
Иль осветлим?

Или в грязи:
Зарастёт вода тиной
И у …болота лягушки …
Иль… в льдинах

Наша душа –
Божий родник…
высший Закон –
Как мы вершим.

перевод под EDM:

The Spring

[Intro]
(Atmospheric pad swell, evolving arp, low sub pulse, subtle rain FX fading into a steady 4/4 kick)
Our soul is God’s own spring, pure and bright,
The highest Law — it shapes our flight.
We craft the path with every choice we make,
This sacred Law our compass, never fake.

[Verse 1]
God’s Law, the highest Covenant we hold,
Does this Law lift us toward the skies so bold?
Or must we turn and look inside ourselves,
To face the depths, to break through all our shells?
We must inspect the well’s deep bottom, dark and low,
And clean the walls where shadows used to grow.
The spring must stay clear, shining blue and true,
So that we long to drink, to feel it flow anew.

[Pre-Chorus]
To rest beside the water, calm and free,
Like in a bright and holy room, you see.
Let it sparkle with the purity we need,
A gift to others — a miracle indeed.

[Chorus]
Oh, how beautiful this blue water is,
The water that lives deep within us, this is bliss.
Do we govern it with grace and light?
Or do we lose it in the dark of night?

Can we illuminate it, make it glow?
Or will it sink beneath the mud and grow?
In grime and sludge, the water turns to green,
With frogs around the swamp, a hollow scene.


(Drop: full bassline, aggressive sub, layered percussion, bright stabs, euphoric lead)

[Verse 2]
We hold this spring inside, so clear and fine,
But every choice can cloud it, make it mine or lost in time.
We must protect its source, its gentle flow,
For it’s the light that guides us where we go.
If left to rot, it chokes with weeds and slime,
The frogs will croak their song in wasted rhyme.
Or lock in ice, a frozen, silent cry,
While all the warmth we had just fades and dies.

[Pre-Chorus]
But let it shine with purity so rare,
A wonder, a delight beyond compare.
To share its glow, its gift to all who pass,
That’s the true miracle that lasts and lasts.

[Chorus]
Oh, how beautiful this blue water is,
The water that lives deep within us, this is bliss.
Do we govern it with grace and light?
Or do we lose it in the dark of night?

Can we illuminate it, make it glow?
Or will it sink beneath the mud and grow?
In grime and sludge, the water turns to green,
With frogs around the swamp, a hollow scene.


[Bridge]
(Break: kick drops, reversed vocal chop, glitch FX, melodic lead fading in)
Look inside, don’t turn away,
Face the murk, the hidden gray.
Clean the walls, restore the flow,
Bring the spring back from the low.

Let the blue light break through again,
Wash away the stain and pain.
This spring must shine, must stay so clear,
So we can drink without a fear.

(Drop: maximum energy, syncopated claps, soaring synths, driving rhythm)

[Final Chorus]
Our soul is God’s own spring, pure and bright,
The highest Law — it shapes our flight.
We craft the path with every choice we make,
This sacred Law our compass, never fake.

Oh, how beautiful this blue water is,
The water that lives deep within us, this is bliss.
Do we govern it with grace and light?
Or do we lose it in the dark of night?

Can we illuminate it, make it glow?
Or will it sink beneath the mud and grow?
In grime and sludge, the water turns to green,
With frogs around the swamp, a hollow scene.


[Outro]
Let the spring stay blue, stay clean and free,
A living wonder, meant for you and me.
No swamp, no ice — just flow and light,
Our inner spring, our guiding light.

(Fade with repeating vocal chop)
“Pure and blue… pure and blue…
The water in our soul stays true.”


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