Black Hole

Get away from me, my darling, get away!
I'm a dead man and I feel it every day.
Every day I'm tryin' to stand until I fall,
'cause this darkness caught me almost like black hole.

But you shinin' like star and want me just to know,
That you're whole for me and always love me so.
And I know - your power will annihilate
With my darkness, and to save me is too late...


   Very dramatic, isn't it?
   Don't be sad - it is only
   My Rhyme Trial, and it goes
   All right for real.


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I am not sure you can say "annihilate WITH darkness"... "Annihilate THE darkness" probably will be more correct

Respect

Heyfordian   24.06.2003 13:39     Заявить о нарушении
It is right when only darkness will disappear, but I mean - and my darkness and her light power. In this case all is correct. Thanks for your notice.

Элиас Николссон   24.06.2003 13:43   Заявить о нарушении