The Farewell

I will present you with yellow flowers.
Flowers of our parting.
Parting awash by grief, as by memory.
By memory of our meetings with you.
You snow-white, impregnated by grasses of spring.
Springs of hope and spectacular solar flowers.
Flowers similar to marvelous animals of the skies.
Skies where in blue is whirling a distant bird.
A bird that will arrive to you after many years.
Years filled with lights of meetings and dawns of separations.
Separations, one of which - is ours.
Ours, colored after gentle yellow flowers.
Flowers, which will present to you I...

And there will be one more date.
Date-farewell.
Farewell with you, as a pardon.
To pardon of your future meetings.
Meetings, one of which can be ours...


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Farewell is a greeting of noone…

Sajeahn Njashy   15.08.2003 13:11     Заявить о нарушении
:)
As you can understand this is just simple translation from Russian version of the same poem. Thank you by the way. I do appreciate your curiosity.

Vlad De Vol   15.08.2003 18:46   Заявить о нарушении
Mockerying me?

Sajeahn Njashy   18.08.2003 12:33   Заявить о нарушении
Sorry I’m not quite clear what do you mean. If it was “Mocking” or might be something else?
If N1 – nop, negative!
From other side, sometimes I don’t mind to do so. :)

Vlad De Vol   19.08.2003 09:47   Заявить о нарушении
Rather hard to say it right, when laughing...
Yes, sure, it's ''mocking'', but not the way you mean it to be!
And what for 'not minding' - don't turn mocking into insultation and't'll be ok.
:)

Sajeahn Njashy   19.08.2003 10:30   Заявить о нарушении
Got it! You trying to marry couple words? Like N1 + repeating/copying? Right?

Vlad De Vol   19.08.2003 11:49   Заявить о нарушении
Not yet! 'Look out for more details' - is the frase of the same sort. Got it now?!?

Sajeahn Njashy   20.08.2003 11:10   Заявить о нарушении
Hey, bro! I just give up... Probably I'm just stupid enouth for now for while to think about anything. Might be some other reason. Well, in future I will try harder.

Vlad De Vol   24.08.2003 11:08   Заявить о нарушении
Ok! It's never too late to be late... :)
Beware!

Sajeahn Njashy   25.08.2003 10:37   Заявить о нарушении
Even in this case I don't get it... Never mind.

Vlad De Vol   29.08.2003 05:48   Заявить о нарушении
Never...

Sajeahn Njashy   29.08.2003 10:39   Заявить о нарушении