You and I are walking in the dark
I see nothing
But what do you want me to see
I need nothing
When I feel your trembling heart
When
I know that you belong to me
I want to fly away with you
To the magical and mysterious site
Where each of us may break through
And reach the kingdom of the light.
For your sake do leave all doubts
It is time to stop believing them
Can’t you see they nothing more than crowds
Of shot-sighted, greedy and ambitious rams
We’re all the slaves of the devises
Which is invented to cultivate
The worst human vices
While we need an urgent aid.
They teach you in order to survive
You must abase yourself, deceive
It is the trap for you they lie
By such means
The happiness cannot be achieved
The walk is not to last any more
The sun has raised too high
I see my dear to the door
Kiss your hand and say goodbye
Night walk
© Copyright: Happybrainy, 2002
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Тема интересная и раскрыта неплохо. Но мне кажется, чтобы текст звучал более плавно, надо подровнять количество слогов в разных строчках. И ещё мне почему-то захотелось заменить фразу "They teach you in order to survive" на "They teach you how to survive", так вробе бы более плавно.
С уважением,
April 06.11.2002 08:44 • Заявить о нарушении
С уважением,
April 06.11.2002 08:44 • Заявить о нарушении